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By: TRICKSTERS, Episode 2 | The Secret Lair

TRICKSTERS, Episode 2 | The Secret Lair — Fri, 12 Feb 2010 15:58:04 +0000

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By: Mick Bradley

Mick Bradley — Sat, 06 Feb 2010 14:37:05 +0000

Promising. Very Promising!

By: Super Jesus

Super Jesus — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 23:46:12 +0000

Clearly the jacuzzi is just the new upgraded model of Tardis.

Well done sir.

By: Tracy

Tracy — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 21:11:30 +0000

In the interest of being a good “netizen”, I wanted to pop in and say good for you for publishing this on the blog. It takes a lot of courage to try your hand at fiction. Bravo on a nice first chapter. Love the bits of humor but, then again, I am all about the humor. Keep it coming!

By: Nate

Nate — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 16:48:37 +0000

Jacuzzi … oh my… I kept hoping for the “Eric and the Gazebo” send up. Maybe in chapter 2 …

“Is the jacuzzi evil?”

… “It’s not evil, Eric. It’s a jacuzzi.”

… “It’s too late, Eric. You’ve awakened the jacuzzi”

By: Scott Roche

Scott Roche — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 15:38:00 +0000

Good stuff!

By: Shannon

Shannon — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 15:12:51 +0000

Chris,

I’m digging it. I look forward to more from you and to find out where this story is going.

Cheers!

By: Nycteris

Nycteris — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 14:35:53 +0000

I just love the image of the flames parting like a curtain and the nemesis emerging unscathed. ( Ugh, what a feeling of impotence that would give you!)

You definitely have me curious about all those drawers in the rosewood tackle box.

“People here had never seen a jacuzzi before. They might not know how to handle it.” Excellent. Jacuzzis are pretty weird, aren’t they… don’t trust ‘em.